Tuesday, September 25, 2012

First Chapter- The Wind Blew.

Hello!
   I am Hermione. I am a writer. I love to write and hope you enjoy my books as much as I do. So here is my first chapter of a story. I will come out with a chapter each day. Welcome to the world of Fantasy Underground.



Intro of 
Fantasy Underground


The Wind Blew. 

   I was standing with my pen knife and a piece of wood, guarding the portal to Chesna when it all happened. I was thinking about my brother who had been missing for four years now. I had tried to forget him and told myself that he is probably dead. I just couldn't forget him for some reason. As I thought, I sat down by the tree, when it came. The freezing cold rush of wind came by and made my body slam into the tree and bang my head. "Issac Town hadn't had wind for ages!" I thought. "Halli!" I shouted. Not quite knowing why I called my little sister, maybe I had a concussion? I gazed as my little sister ran with her short legs out the screen door to me, the wind blew again. She fell over onto the grass. My name Jane went through my head a thousand times. I really think I have a concussion. My name stopped going through my head and I froze as a green, bright light shot up in a shape of a circle from the portal. I was scared.

Thanks and stay tuned for the chapters to follow!
 
    Hermione Sharp

2 comments:

  1. This . . . is . . . absolutley . . . AMAZING! How do you write this well?! I couldn't write like that in a million years or writing school! Not that I would go to school for that long . . . but . . . Okay, anyway, SUPER TERIFFIC JOB! Write more chapters!!

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