Thursday, September 12, 2013

Chapter 17- Hell.

Chapter 17
Hell.

          I lost my chance. I could have known why he was after me, but I don't. And now I suffer not knowing why I am wanted, why I am important. I must have been tranquilized after Hell went Poof because now I am once again in a hospital room. But this time the room was painted my favorite color, purple, with poco-dots. Also, scattered round the room were Get Better Soon Cookie Lollipops and balloons. There were teal-colored bean bags and a giant flat-screen TV mounted on the wall. It was funny. On Earth you have Food Network and  Disney and in Chesna you have Food Fun and Walt Disney Channel. Did you know, that Walt Disney was actually from Light Chesna? Yah. 
         Just then a nurse came in. Then Dave, then Gloriana, my bodyguards and Malcom. Even though I know I was in a "dream" when Malcom said that he loved me, I'd always seen him differently since then. I was happy to see Liam and Fred. Gloriana approached with a smile. She started to say "How ar-" when I interrupted. "Why is Hell After me? And WHY didn't ANYONE tell me my name was Vianne?!" I screamed at everyone. Gloriana looked sorry, but didn't say a word. No one did. Even Dave looked sorry as he approached, but I didn't care if they were crying, I had a right to know. So I screamed again, "WHY? Tell me everything or else I'm leaving. Going back to my home in the real world." I knew that was an insult to everyone in that room, but I was so angry, words just flew out my mouth. Doctor ran in. "Tell her! She can't leave, she is still in weak condition!" But no one talked, still. So, I sat up, despite the pain, was about to take out my IV, when I though better. ""Nurse! Nurse!" A nurse came running in. I ordered her to take every tube, IV and needle out. She complained and I ordered again. Liam, Fred, Malcom, Dave, Gloriana, and Doctor were all shouting Stop!. but it was too late. I was leaving this retched place, where I was wanted. Finally, when everything was out, I got up, trying to ignore and not show I was hurting. Doctor rushed to me was about to put me back on the bad, but I dodged. Liam and Fred tried to convince me to calm and lie down, but none of them dared to touch me as I was so fragile, but that was to my advantage. I avoided them easily, and now the only people in my way were Gloriana and Dave. I could see they didn't know what to do because they didn't want to touch me, because they might hurt me, and they knew they couldn't change my mind easily. So, they just stood, blocking the door way. Their legs were spread apart. That's it! It might hurt, but it is my escape. I just had to dive through Gloriana's legs. Not Dave's because he would totally catch me. Bracing the pain, I counted 1, 2, 3. Go! I dived, slid under her and was free. The guards were coming but of course they were afraid of hurting me. Dodge, Dodge, Dodge, I went until I was free, in the Hallway. 
       Yes, I made it, sort of. My body was hurting all over. No one was around. Then I heard running coming down the hallway. I saw a cleaning closet, opened the door and jumped in. But there was no floor. I just fell, down, down, down. I screamed, trying to hold onto something, until I woke, startled. I was breathing heavily. I looked up. I was in the same Purple-Poco-dot room. It was a dream, I thought. Just then Gloriana came in, as well as Liam and Fred. Liam smiled and said "Hello, rough day after waking up from brain surgery, ah?" "Yah. Hah." I forced a smile. Gloriana shot him a frown. I guess he wasn't supposed to talk about that? He turned away.
      Gloriana turned to me with a smile. "We have some things to talk about." "Yes we do." She raised an eyebrow, but continued. "Your name is Vianne and so, now you will be called by your real name. That's the end of that. So, now for your condition. You should be up and running in 1 or 2 days. We have been giving you doses of Hahle  medicine, which helps your body heal faster. You will go back to training for 1 week, to refresh your memory, even though you all ready know pretty much everything and would be our number 1 spy, if you hadn't had so many," she paused. "injuries. You will be our leader and this is where it comes to telling you why Hell has been after you your whole life. Your father isn't mortal, he is from Chesna, Vianne." It was weird being called Vianne, but that wasn't what mattered right now. "WAIT! Your saying the man my mum is married to now, is not my real dad?" I knew that was an obvious question, but with what she was saying, I had to make sure I was hearing right. She then sighed. "Yes. Your birth-Dad is from Chesna. It was no fluke you were put as Chesna's portal Guarder. It wasn't a fluke that you were able to go through the portal. Only Chesna people can go through the portal." "Who is my Dad then?" My heart was beating so fast I felt like it was going to burst. "Lets say-" "I want to know!" I was feeling really impatient. Then she spoke. "Hell is my brother, I am your aunt." My heart stopped. I knew what she was saying. Questions raced through my mind. My brother, my friends, family, questions, but one thing was clear.

Hell is my father.

Sunday, September 8, 2013

Chapter 16- Secrets

Chapter 16
Secrets


         Doctor, nurses, and bodyguards, pushed me down a narrow corridor with Halli running beside me. "What in the Chesna just happened?" "Shhhhh" a bodyguard said. Just then he whacked the wall, making part of it crumble, then a metal object fell out and he smashed it with his foot. "Voice Tracker" he said to the woman bodyguard. Then the thought hit me. These aren't my bodyguards, where was Liam and Fred? And was Malcom OK? 
        Then I heard one of the bodyguards whisper to the other, "How do we get her out, you know with this 'doctor'?" That's it, this whole thing was planned. Everything. These are Hell's spies. But how did they know the secret passage? Who is a double agent?... No, no, it couldn't be, Malcom? I pushed the though away because first I had to figure out how to get away from these spies. And with tubes, needles, and IVs' stuck all around my body, as well as my critical condition, from 'almost death' brain surgery, that wasn't going to be easy. My only hope was in Doctor and the only thing that mattered, was getting my sister to safety, without injury. I was blank for ideas for what seemed like hours, but then my light bulb went on.
        "Doctor," I said in my most innocent voice. "Yes, is everything OK?" Doctor whispered back. "No, I think there were some side effects from the surgery." The woman spy raised an eyebrow, as if she suspected something suspicious. Well, the other spy was busily knocking out and smashing Voice Trackers. "Oh my! What is it?" "Ummm, well it is a little private, can I whisper it in your ear?" The woman spy's eyebrow dropped, as if she suspected nothing. He leaned down. And I whispered, "They are Hell's spies, not my guards." He stood straight up with a worried face and said "I'm afraid we  will have to do something about that later." I didnt know if that was a fake reply about the 'side effect problem' or if it was a fake reply about the guards or it was a we have to deal with it later reply. Which ever one it was, I lost hope in doctor, until, when Doctor knocked the 'man' spy out by a quick leg maneuver to the head. Then when the 'woman' spy shot her gun, he drop rolled to the side. He avoided the shots, until she got annoyed and charged at him. He acted like he wasn't aware that she was coming toward him and grabbed her from behind and threw her into the wall, knocked her out as well. He then ran to the poor, confused Halli, picked her up and put her on my wheeling hospital bed beside me. Then he started pushing us, at a run, talking into all the Voice Trackers, trying to get some Light Chesna person, whether a bodyguard, nurse, regular person or even Gloriana's attention, but nothing happened. No one came to our rescue.
         I got out my own emergency button, and pressed it. A sonic-light shot upward, flashing. "What is that?" Little Halli asked. "It's a emergency button. Supposed to be used if I needed help in Hospital, but I hope the light beam attracts help, not more Hell spies." Just then we came into a room, walls and floor made out of granite, with a tall man standing in the middle, back to us. "What a pleasure to finally meet you, Miss Jane, or should I say Vianne?" His voice was scratchy, dark, evil. This was Hell. I'd never met him before, in person. He wore black robes, with black, knee-high, studded-leather boots. He slowly turned round, but for some reason being in the presence of Hell didn't scare me, it was how he called me Vianne. I must of looked confused because he said "Confused are we?"
        "Why did you call me Vianne?" I asked suspiciously. He looked at me with his cold eyes. "You don't already know, deary?" "Don't call me that" I spit back. Doctor tried to make me call down, gestures saying to be careful, but then Hell spun his hand and Doctor was thrown into the wall. I looked at Doctor, I looked at Hell. "What was that for?" "Be quiet and I will explain, say another word and I will to the same to her. He pointed at my sister. I was about to shout back, but I couldn't let anything happen to her. I nodded.
       "Well, my spies tell me, your name isn't really Jane. They forced your parents into talking. They told me everything in order to save your life. Sweet, isn't it?" He did this evil, high pitched life. I stayed silent. "Smart girl. So, you may have not known before, that I have been hunting you all my life. Your "brother" who came back to get you and bring you to Light Chesna, wasn't actually him." He laughed again. "It was my spy. Your brother died years ago, after I captured him. I killed him because he was in my way of killing you, along with others. Don't worry, he didn't suffer, his death was quick." He did his evil laugh again. I felt awful, my brother has been dead for years and he died alone. And I didn't even know. He had been protecting me. He went to protect me, but, wait. Why does Hell want to kill me and why is he calling me Vianne? "Question time deary or Vianne." he said in a squeaky voice. "Why are you calling me Vianne?" "Oh yes, I forgot. Your parents changed your name to Jane, so it would slow me down from finding you." I couldn't believe it, my name was Vianne. Wait, but Hell could be lying, but why would he lie about that. Words were spinning in my head. Then, I remembered, I was still weak, I had just woken up from a dangerous surgery. Just then men and women in Light Chesna spy clothes, ran in from the tunnel we came from. They ran to me, to Halli, to Doctor, started running my wheeling hospital bed out of the room, but I still had one more question. I looked at Hell. "WAIT! Why are you after me?" He smiled, an evil grin and Poof, he was gone.

Saturday, August 24, 2013

Hello!

Hello everybody!

I am so sorry I have not posted a new chapter in a while. I am about to publish Chapter 16 and hope you enjoy it:)

Thank you to all my viewers,

-H

Sunday, April 14, 2013

Chapter 15- Lights flash...

Chapter 15
Lights flash...

    A bright light shone into my eyes. Wait, then something was shoved onto my face, my mouth. An oxygen mask. I then remembered to breathe, but when I tried all that came out was a dry wisp of air. I then heard a lady say "She needs some extra support. Get the breathing tube." Next thing I knew a needle was stuck into my neck with a circle around it, the tube. Air was then pumped into my neck, and I started breathing normally again. 
  And then, a familiar voice said "Take her into the High-T Recovery Room," It was the doctor!, wait, he could be in the afterlife. I am so confused. I shouted the loudest I could. "WHERE AM I?! I am so confused. Am I still in the afterlife, dead? OR WAS THAT A DREAM?!?!" "Calm down!" said another voice. "I wont calm down until somebody tells ME what is going on!" "Tell her. Don't keep it from her." said a small, cute, familiar voice. 
  Who is this? A voice so small, so cute and loving, so  familiar. A voice that reminded me of home, comforted me, made me laugh. Halli. Halli! No, this couldn't be right, she couldn't be in Chesna, in this dangerous time, she needed to get out of here! She could get killed!
  "Halli!" I shouted as a sat up straight. Pain went throughout my body, stabbing in my neck, back, legs, I then realized I was attached to many tubes and needles, masks. "Lye down! Please Jane lie down." said the doctor. I lay back down when the pain was too much and closed my eyes. Then, Halli's, small hand touched mine. I opened my eyes to see my sister. My comforting, lovely, sweet sister was here. And then there was another shout. "Didn't anyone hear what I said!? Get her into the High-Tech Recovery Room! She is running low on oxygen and needs support on he legs, needs support on her legs before they go numb! Now take her in!" My bed was then wheeled, Halli still held onto my hand and she explained everything. My smart, young sister explained everything to me, calmly, as if I was the young child.
  "Now, Jane, first thing you need to know, this is real life, your not in a dream or dead. Trust me, your safe. You were in a psychological brain universe, well the surgeons were doing a brain surgery, messing with your brain cells and memories. So, that is why all those dreams or things happened. None of it is real. Malcom is alive." "Wait, you saw my dreams and nightmares?" "Yes, Jane. We did. We tried to make the nasty ones go away but when your messing or mixing with the brain, it is hard." "Thank you Halli." I replied, already feeling better, better that I knew what was and what is going on.
  Gloriana's voice then came into ear shot. "Thank you Halli," She turned to me. "you lived." She smiled. Joy and relief came across her face. "Hi." I said, not quite knowing what to say. "Hi." She laughed.
  I reached the room and a huge screen came down from the ceiling. "Jane," I turned to Gloriana. "We need to show you something. Some things have happened since your surgery started. Bad things." She paused. "Hell has attacked the cities of Light Chesna. Of course nobody was in the city, as everyone has already been transported into the halo or 'hotel'. But, they found the flower pots. An alarm went off when one was opened and we closed the tunnels in time, which is good, but we don't know where Hell's spies are. If they have left Light Chesna or are sneaking around in the cities, or even in the Halo. So, everyone in the hotel have been warned and given a code. In each room their is a secret passage that opens if you have the right code. In case of emergency, everyone will go down the secret passage. All the passages lead to a gigantic room with food, water, blankets, beds, clothes, and curtain changing rooms for each family. This is very very very far down, way below the hotel and the hospital. The same has been done for the people in the Halo. Do you follow me?"
   That was a lot to take in. I could barely process, but I got the main points. Basically the hotel and Halo are on lock down. Nobody can go out of them. "Yes. I understand." "Good." She replied as she pointed to the screen. "But we know something they don't. The flower pots have a sensor, so it only lets that family in right?" "Yes. I know that." "But they don't! We got a fingerprint scan and sensor scan and pictures of Hell's spies. So, we know what a couple of the spies look like and what they wear." "That's great." I said as she flicked through the pictures on the screen. "Gloriana?" "Yes, dear." "If we did have to do the secret passage thing soon, I can't do it by myself." "I know. Halli is going to sleep in here. She knows the code and exactly how it works. There are also 2 guards outside you door that will keep you safe. Also Doctor," She looked at the doctor, "Will be sleeping in that room right there." She pointed to a door I hadn't noticed.
    A male nurse then rushed in. He started to say something, but stopped when he saw the pictures, his mouth dropped. He started to run out the door, but a guard got there first. The man shouted, painfully loud, "C@3!"  Within 15 seconds 5 other men appeared with guns, but 8 of our guards had gotten there too. Gloriana was rushed out the room with her four bodyguards. 6 guards then came through the room where the Doctor was going to sleep and unattached me to the tubes and needles that connected me to the wall. One of them grabbed Halli and picked her up, right before a gun shot where she was standing. They rolled me through a wall passage and down a dark passage. An alarm sounded. Lights flashed. Doors slam. Lights go dark. 

Saturday, April 13, 2013

Chapter 15 Preview- A little twisted

Chapter 15 Preview
A little twisted

   I turned my head, slowly, quietly, as if, not to disturb a little white mouse. And then I saw. I turned my head quickly away and pinched myself, this must be a dream, I came here to escape them, I thought. Time went by and I faced reality, when I heard a voice whisper, "Where am I?" I turned my head and there he sat, eyes wide and tensing muscles. I didn't answer, but I thought. 
  How is this possible? How could he grab onto me when he was in a wheel chair? I mean, he could jump out of a wheel chair with broken legs, but if so, why isn't he crying, or looks like he's in pain? Right, boys, they don't show emotion. Duh.
  Malcom. Malcom now stared me in the eyes. His eyes showed embarrassment, confused, and little bit of anger. "Where am I?!?" He know shouted. "Welcome to the afterlife." I whispered. I then suddenly felt a rush of anger, than sadness, then confused, and then happy, to mad, to so stressed I forgot to breath. Next thing I knew he was shouting at me "Breathe Jane! Breathe! Your face is turning purple!" The stress feeling then past and I breathed the air again. But it wasn't over. Malcom started turning brown, like an old banana, crinkling into a ball. He shouted for help and I tried to run over, but I was stuck to the ground. Malcom now screamed like a little girl, as he was sucked into the ground. I screamed, then cried. I'm useless. I thought. 
  My attention then turned to a noise, a scratchy, squeaky noise. Then a laugh, an evil laugh, a cruel laugh. It continued and I covered my ears with my hands, curled into a ball and cried more. I was scared, more scared then I have ever been in my whole life. Suddenly, out of know where, my mum, dad, sister, and brother appeared. They were in front of me saying 'stay strong', one by one, and then chanting it all together. I then remembered I have a sister and brother. I had forgotten about them. Totally. I then cried even harder, screamed for help, until I had no voice. Then came a stabbing pain in my wrist and then my back. I released my aching arms from my tight ball, helplessly. Shaking pain, then numbness came to my legs, as I fell into a deep, black, hole. Down Down Down...
   A gasp and a bright, white glare.
   

Saturday, March 16, 2013

Chapter 14- Mirrors

Chapter 14
Mirrors

   I sat, frozen, as if I had been stuck in an ice cube. The question swirled in my head. Why does Gloriana want to use me as a weapon if she loves me as if I was her own daughter? And if I died, why couldn't they do some other surgery to bring me back to life? Oh, of course, they haven't invented a cure for that? Oh, doctor scientists, maybe you not as good as you think you are. Next, I stood up, knocking over a glass of water. Everybody in the room jumped. "Do you think she heard everything I said?" Malcom asked. "I don't know. I think she just got up. But, but... We need to come up with some solution so we can see her and hear her. Any ideas?" "We can try, well, it is sort of stupid..." Gloriana interrupts. "We will take any ideas at the moment." It was Fred speaking. "Well, in those fairy tales you read when you are little, the ghosts flew into the mirror and then they could be visible and you can hear them talk. Ghosts are sort of like spirits." "That's it! Let's give it a try." She walked over to one of the four white walls and pressed her hand on  it. Part of the wall then disappeared. Next a shimmering, white and gold, full body mirror appeared. Gloriana then signaled for Dave to carry it to one side of the room, everybody else seated themselves in front of it. Gloriana then started talking while walking to the mirror, her white and gold sequined gown flowing behind her. A gold, shimmering crown with an engraved white Pegasus on a pure gold circle dangled over her forehead. I looked down at my lap as Gloriana was talking. "Now everyone, don't get super emotional if you see her, if this works. So, let's try. Jane, if you can hear me, please listen. Walk into the mirror please." Everyone in the room went silent, some people holding their breath. I continued to look at my lap, I then realized something. I was dressed in a white, long dress. The sleeves were sheer, with a hole on the shoulders and the sleeves extended to the floor. I had a long, white, snowflake pattern train behind me. The white dress was strapless. I then realized I was wearing a white flower crown speckled with gold dust. A white, crystal pendant attached to the flower crown. It was the shape of a snowflake with a Pegasus in the middle. I didn't know they had such nice clothes in the afterlife. I thought. I then remembered that I was supposed to walk into the mirror. How long had I been day dreaming? Few. Everyone was still sitting, still holding their breath. I walked toward the mirror. I didn't want them to suffocate from holding their breath too long. I stopped in front of the mirror, took a deep breathe, and walked into the mirror. There was a sudden burst of light and then everybody cheered. I turned around and all the people I knew and loved were standing in front of me. I smiled and tried to hold back my tears, but I couldn't help a tear from running down my face. Nobody seem to notice though. Everyone was still cheering and smiling and shouting. I was started to feel dizzy. I knew this wasn't good. I knew I was going to black out any second.
    But I didn't. Someone caught me as I feel forward, except their hands went straight through me. I was on the ground, but I caught myself with my hands. Then somebody said "Are you OK?' It was Dave. He helped me up and then I shouted "How can you see me!?" half excitedly and half shocked. "Something to do with the mirror, I think." I started feeling dizzy again and collapsed. "I feel dizzy." I said lamely. "I can see that." Gloriana rushed over. "Darling, are you OK?" "What do you think!?" I shouted back, feeling fury, even though I didn't know why. Then Malcom wheeled over. "Are you OK?" Even though I knew he did it out of kindness, I felt even more fury. "What do you think?!" I shouted even louder. I then realized that everyone was around me, I thought they were still in their seats, but apparently not. Malcom looked away. I regretted what I said, but everyone should give me some slack, shouldn't they? I just died, went into the afterlife, and then walked through a mirror into real world again. It is not something that an ordinary person does everyday, is it? Suddenly, I wanted to get out of this room. I turned my head to Dave. "Dave. Please. I want to get out of this room, lye down, rest. Please." "Yes.." he said as Gloriana interrupted him. "No. She must stay here. We to tell her things and she needs to tell us some things." "But.." I tried to say. "No buts." she said before I could continue.
     If no one is going to help me here, then I wont help them. I'll run off, hide in the Halo. Somewhere, but they would find me eventually. But.. Ah hah! I know 2 hiding spots. Either go back home on Earth or run back into the mirror. If I go to Earth they'll eventually find out I went back to earth and come get me. If I go back to Earth and... run away to Aunt Cake! But they'll still eventually find me. But if I go into the mirror, they cant come after me! They can't find me. That's it, but if I go into the mirror, I may never be able to come back to earth again. But I'll have to worry about that later. Anyways, I will probably find some amazing, nice friends in the afterlife/heaven. I can wear anything I want! Eat what I want! Nobody there to control y portions. Everything will work out in the end. OK, Jane, let's do it. I told myself. I realized then that they had been talking to me by the looks on the faces. They were looking at me like I was deaf or I had gone wacko. Gloriana then noticed I was back with them again and was about to start talking again, but I didn't waste any time. I jumped up, ignoring the feeling of sickness and dizziness and ran through the people, missing their hands trying to grab onto me as I ran. Gloriana shouting "Stop Jane! Please! Someone get her!" Now people were running almost at my heels, they were catching up. I was almost at the mirror, and I was so focused on the mirror, that when I was inches away, someone grabbed hold of my waist. I was surprised, but didn't care. I pulled away as hard as I could and flung myself into the mirror.

Saturday, February 23, 2013

Chapter 13- Realizing and Surprises

Chapter 13
Realizing and Surprises

    Darkness. My eyes are closed, that's why it is dark, duh. I thought to myself. I opened my eyes and rubbed them with my hands. I screamed. My hands are blue and transparent. My whole body is blue and transparent. "Help! Help! Help me!" I scream, but no one could hear me. Then a nurse ran through me. I screamed again. I'm a ghost. I'm dead. Dead.
    Is this what happens when you die? You look after and watch over your loved ones? No. I can't be dead. This must me a dream. It must. I went up to pinch myself but my hand just went through my arm. I am dead.  I thought. I am ghost. I then realized I was standing in a room. A boy with a huge gash on his leg was screaming and lying on a white cushy bed. I went over to him. I know he couldn't hear me, but I said "It's OK  I'm here. I'm Jane. Calm down. You're OK." I then touched his gash and as soon as I did, it healed. The boy stopped crying and the nurse that just came in, dropped her tray and board. "Above glory!" she exclaimed. "She's made it! Jane! She's made it!" and ran out the room. Seconds later Dave, Liam, Fred, 5 nurses, Malcom who is in a wheel chair... A wheel chair! "Malcom!" I shouted, but of course nobody heard me. Malcom also had a broken arm. Like I do. Well, I used to. And then Gloriana came in, a very tired, puffy and panda eyed Gloriana. She has been crying, a lot. Malcom also was puffy eyed. I then realized, everyone was puffy eyed from crying, except for the nurses. Then Ryan limped in. She's alive. Oh, I so wish I could just shout out and talk to my best friend, but I can't. Next, Gloriana walked over to the boy. "It has to be her." She started rubbing up and down his leg, where the gash was, with her hand. "Look at this." she whispers. She then waves for Dave to come over. "Leap'n lizards!" he says. Gloriana then speaks to the boy. "Look at this my little boy, do you see that mark?" "Yes Gloriana. I do. I do. It is a snowflake with a tiny Pegasus inside. Snow Pegasus. Snow Pegasus! That's Jane's code name in English! It really is her."
      Then Gloriana spoke to the air, she was speaking to me. "Jane, if you can hear me, then heal Malcom's broken arm. Everyone turned to Malcom. I walked over to him. I touched his arm and the cast, sling, everything disappeared. All the nurses exclaimed "Above glory!" "Yes. This is amazing. The same mark is on Malcom's arm. This is it. This it it, everybody! This is our weapon. Hell and his spies may know her number code name, but they don't know what it means in English. I can't believe it." says Gloriana. "Hip! Hip! Hurrah!" the room exclaims. I then felt faint. Dizzy. I started rocking back in forth. I fell over and whacked into a table, knocking it over. I fainted.
      "I think she fainted." Gloriana says. "She could get hurt in this second world where you go after you die. She didn't deserve this. She didn't deserve to die in this world. How could you? How could you test a sketch cure on her? The most important person to Light Chesna. Our biggest chance of defeating Hell was with her alive with us in this world." Malcom shouts out. "We have gone over this so many times, Malcom. She was probably going to die anyways. We just didn't tell her. We did the surgery to see if we could keep her alive." Gloriana says in a calm voice. "But there was a chance she could have lived is we didn't do the surgery." he argues. "I know Malcom. There was a chance. We are all very upset about this." Gloriana says, trying to keep her calm voice going. "Did you send a letter to her parents? Yes, you did. You can imagine how upset they were and are. And then when her brother and her sister who is on earth found out she was dead. Imagine how they were when they found out that Jane also forgot she had siblings." Malcom shouts louder. "That was one of the reasons we tried the surgery, to bring those memories back." Gloriana says. She broke out of her calm voice and shouts at Malcom. "Do you know how upset I was when I found out she was dead? I cried myself to sleep. I prayed for the first time. I didn't eat for a day, I just cried for a whole day. She was like a daughter to me! And she died. I loved her like she was my own..." and then she started crying.
      I woke up just as I heard the last lines Gloriana said. I was touched and then I felt like I was about to cry. I never knew she cared for me so much... "Do you know how I felt!? I don't think you know how I felt. I cried so much when she died. We were supposed to be a pair of spieries together. I remember the first time I saw her, the first time she came to Chesna. I thought she was so cool, but I never met her until I came back to Chesna, to send information to Hell at age 17! And I first saw he at 6! That's 11 years! When I found out she hated me and didn't want to work with me in the Top Spy Depart because of gluing the earpiece to her ear, that helped me realize what I was doing was all wrong. When Hell gave me two options, die or help him, of course I said I'd help him because I was selfish, a coward and didn't want to die. So when I turned on the spies I was working with and saved her I told her everything because I couldn't hold it in for any longer. And then I found out we would work together and she was leaning toward being my friend and we could get to know each other, I was so happy. Next, before I knew it we were both in hospital. She was seriously injured. I found out, next, that she might die. She was my only real friend because I think she let me in because she realized that I had realized that what in the past was wrong and that I wanted to change, to be better. I went to sleep that night and was woken by a huge commotion and was put in a wheelchair and taken to a service for her! When I found out Jane was dead, I was devastated. I loved her. Do you understand how I feel know?" he finishes with a sigh.
      He loved me. He remembered the first time he saw me. I was so mean to him and all he was, was a confused sole. He just needed help. And I rejected him at first and he looked up to me to help him. And then  as he said, when I realized he needed help and that he had realized that what he was doing was wrong I did try to be more friendly. I can't believe he loved me.
      Wow, I didn't realize so many people cared about me, loved me. But if Gloriana loved me, why does she want to use me as a weapon against Hell? Why can't I ever have a peaceful life? Who knew I wouldn't even be able to have a peaceful afterlife? Surprise, Surprise.   

Friday, February 22, 2013

Chapter 12- Last Light

Chapter 12
Last Light


     "Where's Ryan?" I ask Gloriana. "Um, uh..." Gloriana stumbles. I have never heard Gloriana stumble before. "Where is she?" I say softly. "I don't know." she chokes out and starts crying. I have never seen her cry before. "Gloriana, it's OK. Why does this make you so upset?" "It's just," she stumbles. "I feel like I'm letting my people down. 3 people have disappeared from Light Chesna or, or..." she stumbles again. "been captured or taken somewhere in the Halo with Hell's spies and being tortured because Hell wants his spies to get information and secrets about Light Chesna and bring them to him." Gloriana straightens up and I look her in the eye and say, "You are not letting your people down. You are the best Queen. Don't ever forget that. So, do you think that is what is happened or is happening to Ryan?" "Yes."
       "I have to go looking for her!" I scream and sit up. "She is my best friend!" "You can't Jane. And please Jane lie back down! You need to rest! I don't want you to hurt yourself more. Please Jane! Your hurt and still recovering! Lie down!" I lay back down. "It doesn't hurt to sit up." I protest. "That's because your on pain killers." Gloriana replies. "When will I be up and running again?" I ask after a short silence. Gloriana looks at me blankly and then she turns to the doctor who just walked in. "Doctor, when will Jane be up and running again? And when will she be able to do her normal stuff, like aerials and back flips? You know we need her to have a fast recovery and get going in the spy department, as well as Malcom. They need to be my top pair of spireries..." "Wait!" I interrupt. "What are spireries?" "A spiery is a pair of spies that work together in the top spy department." She then turned back to the doctor. "Doctor, what is your answer? Oh and doctor, did you not recover her whole memory?" "Um.. I think she will be up in running in about three and a half weeks. And  my answer to your second question is, um, well, that is why I came in here. To tell you that we did not recover 2 things. The first one is facts about the top spy department." He then lowered his voice to a whisper. "The second is she doesn't remember her brother and sister." I stood starstruck for a moment and then started shouting. "Wait! I have a brother and sister? That can't be true. I don't have siblings." There were glances exchanged and then Gloriana sighed. "Why can't you get these memories back? There two very big ones." "Gloriana," Doctor sighed. "We talked about this before we even started the first surgery. Memories, facts or people she haven't thought of for a long time or haven't been really part of yet, like the Top Spy Depart, are really hard memories to bring back. Only a 2 days ago did the doctor scientist come up with a sketch cure. We haven't even tested this cure. If something were to go wrong, her condition could get even worse..." "But I need her up and running in a week! Working in the Top Spy Depart. Now, Doctor, I need you to get her better in the next 2 weeks, preferably 1 week, but that's pushing it. You will do what ever you can to get her better. And have the doctor scientist ever been wrong in the last 14 cures they have come up with?" Doctor shakes his head no. "I didn't think so..."
      I have never heard Gloriana so, so... sassy. I thought. My thoughts broke away when Doctor started calling my name. "Yes?" I said. "We are going to test this cure on you, OK?" he says. "But what if it goes wrong?" "I'm taking my chances. We need to do what ever we can to get you better, quicker. We are also going to do another procedure. This one has been tested multiple times. This procedure with help your body not get blotchy and red once your off the pain killers. It will also help your bruises get better faster and just in general, it will help your body recover faster." I then realized that I had missed a whole conversation between Doctor and Gloriana as I saw Doctor exchange a worried glance with Gloriana as she exchanged a 'do it' glance with him. Gloriana then looked at me, came over to me and stroked my head, just like the way my mother did when I was little. "You will be up in no time, sweetie." She then forced out a weak smile and then I realized something. She was worried too, I saw it in her eyes. She was also scared that this surgery might not turn out well. Was I supposed to be worried?
       I turned to Doctor. "Doctor, your putting me to sleep, right?" "Of course!" he shouted. "We always do." His voice was calm and soothing. I then heard Gloriana walk out the room as Doctor wheeled me into the Snow Surgery room. Did I have my own surgery room? Then thoughts rushed into my head. What if this surgery doesn't work out? What if it goes totally wrong? What would happen to me? I then felt a needle in my arm and knew I would fall asleep in seconds. Then one last question swirled in my head as I started to fall asleep.
If the surgery goes wrong, will I ever wake up again?

       I tipped my chin up to look at the lights, to just catch one glimpse of lights, lights I might never see again as I was pulled into a deep, deep sleep. A deep, deep sleep of which I may never awaken.

Thursday, February 21, 2013

Chapter 11- So many thoughts

Chapter 11
So many thoughts

     A soothing voice talked to me. "It's OK. It's Gloriana. Your safe." She kept repeating these words, over and over again. I blinked and opened my eyes. I was in a white room. The whole room was covered in a white material. It looked like bomb-proof material. There were no tables, but then I saw a nurse place her hand on the wall and then a drawer popped out of the wall with 1 needle, a glass of water, and a star shaped cookie. I looked at her and said "Hello." "Hello, sweetie. How are you feeling?" she replied. "OK. Do you remember me?" "Yes. I remember." "Were you attacked by men in black?" "I don't know. What do you mean men in black?" Gloriana then sighed and said to the nurse "Go on then." Gloriana then stood up and walked out the room. The next thing I knew, I had a needle in my arm, and fell asleep. 
    I woke up, once again as Gloriana walked into the room. She sat down and said "What is your name?" "Jane." "Were you attacked by men in black?" Then the flash back began. It didn't seem that scary when it was actually happening, but watching it all over again was scary. "Jane, Jane!" Gloriana shouted. "Are you OK?" "I'm OK. Can I sit up?" "No!" Gloriana replied, worried I would sit up before she even answered. "You badly fractured your back, have a concussion, and broke your arm." "What?" I shouted. "That can't be true. It can't be true!" "I'm sorry, sweetie." "You should be. Why didn't you come looking for me earlier? Like when I was 30 minutes late? You should have known something was wrong. I have never been later than 15 minutes to IM." "Why did you run away from your guards? Why did you not come straight to IM?" she questioned me. I sighed. "The truth is, I'm not really sure. It is not like I don't remember, though. I guess I was mad that Malcom got Dave. I wasn't thinking straight. I didn't realize it at the time, but I was muddled. I did things I normally wouldn't do." There was a long silence before I broke it with a question.
      "Wait, how did I break my arm and fracture my back?" "Well, Malcom knocked down the guy who was whacking you in the head. Malcom thought that he had knocked the guy out, but he hadn't. The guy was only pretending to be knocked out. So, when Malcom was coming over to you..." "That's when I blacked out. When Malcom was coming over to me." I interrupted. "As I was saying, when Malcom was coming over to you, the guy jumped up and knocked Malcom down and before Malcom could get back up the guy jumped on your arm and kicked you in the head. Next, he picked you up and started running, but before he could get far Dave caught up with him. They stood face to face. They started fighting, the man still holding you and then Dave said "Give me her or I will end you." "You'll end me no matter what happens." the man replied. Then, without a moment's notice he threw you to the side causing you to fracture your back." "Wow." I replied. "Finally Dave ended him." Gloriana said nonchalantly. "What happened next?" "Well, then our spies and fighters took the two men away and you were rushed to the hospital. We had to due some quite a few surgeries to get all of your memory back from the concussion. Also you broke your arm and did something else to it, so, we had to do surgery on your arm too. We were lucky you had your back brace on when he threw you or you would have fractured many places. We think you fractured your back because you already had very bad bruising and then the force of the throw just made a fracture." "Gloriana, let me get this straight. You did surgeries to get my memory back? How is that possible." "Well, our scientist doctors came up with a cure a couple weeks ago." she said. "Wow, your technology and cures are way ahead of the ones on earth." I mumbled. I then thought of Malcom.
         "Where's Malcom? What happened to Malcom?" " Gloriana pointed to the wall. "He is in the room next door. He has a bad concussion and had to have surgery on his knee." she said sadly. Almost the way siblings are upset because their brothers or sisters are extremely ill. "And what happened to Liam and Fred?" "They were fine. They were only whipped, so once they got healed, they were fine and are back in work now." And then the thought hit me. What happened to Ryan?

Wednesday, February 20, 2013

Chapter 10- Blacking out comes my way, too often

Chapter 10
Blacking out comes my way, too often


   Even though I didn't know what it was I clung onto it for dear life. I didn't want to whack into railing. I then reached up my other hand and grabbed on. I then looked up and saw a rope, but a smooth one. And when you held onto it it had something in the smooth rope that helped you get a better grip. I then started brainstorming ideas, as I couldn't just let go as I was positioned right above the middle of the spiraling staircase, just to the outside of the railing. Wait, Wait!... If I was hanging onto a rope above me and I was to the outside of the railing, how could I be holding onto something above me. I looked up again. This rope, was just floating in mid air, but stuck in mid air. When I tried to yank on it and tug on it, it wouldn't budge.
    In mid air... In mid air I thought. How is this possible? I then listened to the sounds around me. The boys were almost 2 more spirals up. How did they not see me?... I thought. I looked around me, looking at my surroundings. There was a mirror, the staircase, obviously, the boys... The mirror! I adjusted my head, still holding onto the rope, and stared into the mirror. All of my surroundings were there, but I wasn't showing up in the mirror. I'm invisible! That was why the boys didn't see me. I was thinking that, probably, as long as I held onto the rope, I would be invisible, but when I let go, I would appear.
   Even though the rope helped my keep a grip with my hands, my arms were getting really tired. I need to find a way to get back onto the staircase. I looked up at my hand and pulled myself up, level with wrists. I looked at my watch. I was 35 minutes late to IM. People will probably come looking for me soon. I then thought of an idea and thought to myself, Duh!... I just start swaying and then let go when I was tilted into the staircase platform and let go from the rope. Easy. I might scrape my hands, but that is better than just hanging here... OK then. 1, 2, 3,... I was about to jump when suddenly, something clasped onto my hand, squeezing it so tightly, my hand started to turn purple. Trying not to cry, I looked up and saw a stone hand. What in the world? I thought. Then the stone hand started to crumble. I then did my original plan and landed on the staircase platform with a quiet thud. I then started running down a couple flights of stairs and then came to an elevator  I pressed the up button, stood to the side of it, to make sure no one would see me if there was someone in there... Ugh, Oh, I thought as two boys came out the elevators, the ones that were looking for me. I slid round the corner of the elevator box. I then remembered I still am wearing my back brace. How I didn't remember earlier, I'll never know.
      8 minutes passed, as the boys talked and talked. I then thought, why do I not want to be found? They could have just taken me to IM and I would not have been almost 45 minutes late to IM. Why did I run away from them the first time? Was it because I was mad that Dave wasn't my bodyguard anymore? Gloriana is going to kill me, no, wait. Gloriana doesn't get angry and is the sweetest, most understanding person you will ever meet. And it isn't safe for me to be out here alone if a spy is around and could just jump out and kill me. Now, that's the person who would kill me. 
      My thoughts were interrupted by a loud sound. A crashing, fighting, shouting noise. I peered round the corner to see what was happening. Two men in black were fighting Liam and Fred. I had to do something. I spun back round when Liam and Fred were facing my way and the men in black, the other way. I could sneak up on the spies and hit their pressure points as Kaka taught me, but by the time I did one, the other would be trying to kill me. I looked round the corner and Liam caught my eye. At that moment on of the men in black brought Liam down and started shouting at him. "Where is she? Where is the Snow Pegasus? Huh?" Liam didn't answer. The other man in black then got Fred and started questioning him. "Where is Snow Pegasus? You know, don't you?" Fred then caught my eye. His eye was full of bravery and courage. He wasn't going to tell a sole, that I was right behind them. I turned my focus to Liam. His eyes are full fright and mad. I knew I had to do something, but I couldn't. My back brace restrained me from doing advanced moves to even little beginner moves. I wanted to rip my back brace off, but I couldn't reach the 8 straps that attached it to my back. The doctor also said for two weeks I can't do any training, or fighting, or anything. I told myself, back in the hospital, I was going to actually do what he said, but I wasn't expecting this and I'm sure my doctor wasn't expecting this either. This is all my fault. If I had just gone to IM, this wouldn't have happened. I had to do something. These guys are in danger of dying because of me. At this thought I jumped out and said "Looking for me?" The men in black whirled around. The one closer to me shouted to the other and said "Hold on to these guys. I'll get her." He ran toward me about to punch me in the head, when I hit 2 of his pressure points, 3, 4, 5 pressure points and he fell to the ground. I turned to the other man. I realized that the men in black had been whipping my bodyguards. The man then shoved Liam and Fred to the side. He stared at me for a very long time and then ran. He must have realized I had a back brace and came at me from an angle I couldn't pressure point him. He was about to knock me to my feet when I thought, I am going to be dead if I don't do some real moves or fighting. 
       So, as he swung his leg at mine, I did a back flip. Sorry doctor, I never real follow the rules. I was expecting this to hurt my back a ton, but it didn't. I stood face to face with my opponent. He grabbed me by the arms and said "You're a clever one, aren't you?" As he said this he brought me down to the ground, on my knees. My back, now, to painful to do anything. His hand came fast toward my head, as I heard footsteps and shouts. The man though didn't hesitate punching, and his hand came whamming into my head. I knew I had a couple seconds until I would black out. I felt another punch, harder this time come colliding into my head again and again. I had two seconds left of light, when a figure came running up the stairs. He did a flip and knocked the man to the ground. It was Malcom. The guy he had knocked to the ground was unconscious. He then came rushing to me shouting my name, as Dave, Gloriana, Gloriana's bodyguards, the Importants, Light Chesna spies and fighters came toward me, as I blacked out.